Two Moon Haikus
I.
The moon of summer
flirts with the navy blue sky
behind her lace fan
II.
The wind blows too hard
behind the running clouds
for the moon to turn on
January 2011
For One Stop Poetry's Monday Poetry Form at the inimitable One Stop Poetry
Photo provided by OneStopPoetryThe second haiku has previously appeared in slightly different wording on twitter #haiku
You said: "moon"
ReplyDeleteMe: "Sun"
Is it the moon,
or the sun?
And
does that matter?
I bet the moon is trying to make itself visible. I love when it's there, it follows me home and I feel protected. =)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Haikus, Hedgewitch. =)
Kiss you girl. =*
Bright Moons (two) here -can't choose a fave for both are great
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Yay! I love these. Especially the first - "flirts with the navy blue sky behind her lace fan." You captured it, girl! truely beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haikus and stunning image: "behind her lace fan". Just lovely.
ReplyDeleteGreat thought in these haikus! Enjoyed!
ReplyDeleteI posted my Haiku as a comment on the One Stop site. Just lazy, I guess.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful.. loved them both.. do visit my page too.. I too talk about Moon..
ReplyDeletethe moon flirting with the navy blue sky...nice..
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed these both so much. It does seem the sky is full of personalities...
ReplyDeleteHmm, I personally think the photo has the sun behind it but that's just nitpicking...
ReplyDeletePersonifying the moon and the sky, good images.
Yes the "lace fan" image is very nice.
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