Incubus VIII
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Untitled, by Zdzisław Beksiński |
Incubus VIII
(Bloody Hell)
(Bloody Hell)
Hell is lonely without my demon--
my personal one, I mean, because
there's no shortage here of devils.
Basting on the liquid lava's lips,
I'm alone in brimstone sunscreen,
I'm alone in brimstone sunscreen,
no ruby pitchfork's flip
when one side gets too burnt,
no serpent sapient tail to scale me,
just the brisk popping of my cookery.
I thought my demon knew there's no
vaccine for the maenad's bite, that
nothing says forever like damnation.
I was killing more than willing
to lie griddled on bloodred coals
and call it love; but I missed his
listening kiss in the hissing steam.
Hell is lonely, bloody
empty without my demon.
empty without my demon.
I thought this blistered blaze might power
his blade-heart's forge, and this hammer pain
his blade-heart's forge, and this hammer pain
might twin us bright as living never did
yet after the first in-twisting, after
first blood spilled
he disappeared
and that is Hell for you.
~June 2013
[ This was originally posted for
dVerse Poets, where Karin Gustafson (Manicddaily) challenged us to write of twins,
twining, combining or uncombining. Though I thought I'd finished with him, as
I've written many little scribbles about my twin the Incubus, still he seems to
linger somewhere at the back of Hell's waiting room. If you'd like to
read the others in this series, you can find them here. ]
xoxox to you, Joy.
ReplyDeleteFirst--what a nice idea! It is great to see activity here--kind of heart-warming (especially with this one!) I remember this poem and always liked it a great deal for its sardonic wit and very vivid imagery. Was it Sartre said, "hell is other people"? Yes, but you have a kind of anti-existentialism going on here--hell a torment one must suffer, in this case, alone. The playing out of the metaphor is especially compelling--the devil is in the details as it were--and one's demon here seems more like the demon lover (damn narcissist) who gets you into trouble then disappears at the first sign of blood (or probably in the more typical case in the first month without blood) rather than a true inner daemon, who might stick with you to the bloody end. Safe travels and thanks for thinking of us (your readers.) K.
ReplyDeleteHugs to you and best wishes.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to say that it was a cool pic. I have a good friend who makes these weird big translucent clothing as an art installation. Here's one you might like. https://katehamiltonstudio.files.wordpress.com/2011/06/kate.jpg
ReplyDelete"That is Hell for you" -- Or that's a devil for you, or the Devil. Or a man ... Infernity is the reward for our sins, as Paradise is the bilious blight of one's blessings; eeeevil love can only double-down on lupine delight, which down under is chilling balefire indeed. I get Persephone here as Tammy Wynette, rueing the demon who did her wrong. It would be a hoot if it didn't hurt so much. Moonshine without the yeehaw is cold comfort. So good to find something alglow in Hedge's hearth. This one's a Yule burner ...
ReplyDeleteI was killing more than willing
ReplyDeleteto lie griddled on bloodred coals
and call it love; but I missed his
listening kiss in the hissing steam.
What a treat to read your Incubus poetry - always so rich and fulsome.
I like the hare in your garden. We are having snow here, too.
ReplyDeleteReposts are always a good idea. It's a shame that, in poetry blogging, such excellent stuff gets buried in the archives. Hardly anyone ever goes into them, I don't think.
Hopefully, you are recharging.
"nothing says forever like damnation."
ReplyDeleteI just love what you do with words... ♥
Thank you for your generous sharing. I missed this first time around so I appreciate another chance to savor your words. I especially liked the image of a listening kiss which is the lover's preocupation with himself in this instance but could be wonderfully sweet in a true love.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone--so glad you enjoyed this one. I hope to be doing a bit more reading and visiting when we get back after Thanksgiving.
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