This link I found through Rommy Driks talks about the difficulty of being creative in the crazyhouse of Trump's America--some of you may relate. That said, with the hat tipped to a better human than I will ever be (you can read about Galen here,) I hope for us all to have a kickass weekend, despite the times and the dismal real-world provocations otherwise.
So, let's begin.
(Oh, and it *is* the month of All Hallows, by the way...)
The Arrival
The eyes of the hag
stare from the night,
broken windows
in a house with no kitchen.
October has come
to harvest the bright
to coo to the dead
to slip the razor
inside the fruit.
The red way shines
in the bitter light.
There's nowhere to hide,
no road that runs out
of Murdertown.
~October 2017
Image via internet; author unknown. Fair use.
Personal Note--My
blog-hopping days of "love yours--here's
mine" are over and items posted in this spirit may not be answered. There are literally dozens of sites for that--you don't need this one. Also, each prompt begins on Friday and expires Sunday evening. Older prompts are not monitored.
Can someone have an imagery crush? I hope so. Because right now, I'm totally crushing on the imagery brewing out of your entire poem... especially the middle stanza. The tone embraces the soul of the season--I think I just saw October and his Blood Moon dancing with delight. What I love most is that although things look rather dire, the poem leaves me with the sort of hope that screams of good tomorrows to come. The dead will be lullabied to sleep, and after the razor is done with the fruit... we'll have some seeds.
ReplyDeleteThanks Magaly--I love that you can find hope in anything, including my(as someone who no longer is allowed here once said) 'odes to doom and despair.' And I love your own wild ongoing tale and what you're doing with it.
DeleteI think I have to see/find some goodness through the spilled blood. If I don't, I will drown. And one can't kick the guilty bastards in the teeth while one is drowning...
DeleteDamn straight. Priorities.
DeleteI go so excited that I forgot to add my link to my "Wild Magic". Here it is:
ReplyDeletehttp://magalyguerrero.com/wild-magic/
I like the imagery here the razor, the fruit, that Hallow lead up to the last line. I didn't know you had been to Detroit once again the violence capitol of America (so they say).
ReplyDeleteYa know Joy, Trump one would think would be ripe for inspiration but the carnival he has made thus far has been a London Fog that one never knows what is coming out of the murk. Fie on it.
this was all I had today
I think that town is becoming every town, Mark...not just Detroit any more, but a blood shadow everywhere. And Trump couldn't be inspired if an angel flew up his butt--it would die there. Thanks for this, and for playing.
DeleteGrimy and macabre - this is no bowdlerized version of October. The horror is splayed out like a body at a crime scene. Darkly brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThis is my contribution: http://kestrilsrhythmsandgroove.blogspot.com/2017/10/candied-violets-last-lesson.html
Thanks Rommy, for the comment, for playing so adroitly, and for that article--I found it very reassuring.
DeleteCricket played early:
ReplyDeletehttps://cricketvigil.wordpress.com/2017/10/04/phony/
thanks ...
DeleteThanks for giving us the words.
DeleteAw. Music to my ears. Adore this doomy round. The trickster's off his/her meds. Consider my weekend's ass kicked.
ReplyDeleteA 55 for the shadow looming over October's shoulder:
https://blueoran.wordpress.com/2017/10/06/anything/
Thanks, B--my meds never seem to work any more. ;) You nailed a rock and roll feeling with yours, and made me almost want to date a musician again. Nah--been there, effed that up. ;)
DeleteHi, Joy, I began this poem as a 55 worder for you, but it seems incomplete. I may revise it at a later date but leave it here for your perusal.
ReplyDeletehttp://calibanandmiranda.blogspot.co.za/2017/10/curses-heart.html
This is a perfect thing in itself, Kerry--and whether or not you take it further, it suited both the season and the form down to the ground. Thanks for coming to the party...and in your very best dress, too.
DeleteI am enthralled by the image of a house with no kitchen, such a place seems unsanctified, somehow. Yet the harvest is in and the razor is sharp!
ReplyDeleteI had the same feeling about the kitchenless house, Kerry. What a device, but Hedge is the master at that!
DeleteThanks ladies--I knew you'd get it.
DeleteLafayette, I am here!
ReplyDeletehttp://fireblossom-wordgarden.blogspot.com/2017/10/an-old-scarecrow-shuffles-into-dannys.html
Yours is uber creepish and scarily scintillating. I expect no less from my Halloween hobgoblin-in-crime!
So anyway, here's mine, I'm not visiting yours lol.
Yay!! I love Danny's, and I love this! And I really love that you were able to play--thanks for all of that and more, Shay.
DeleteA dark tome indeed. Kitchenless houses (souless and bare) and razored fruit( tempting and deadly) are such potent images. Here's my take on it all, inspired ( if that's the right word) by the article linked.
ReplyDeletehttps://paulscribbles.wordpress.com/2017/10/06/carry-at-hip/
Thanks Paul--and thanks for adding your 55 to the mix.
DeleteWow! Wow! Wow! I love the whole thing but that second stanza is incredible!
ReplyDeletehttps://blackinkhowl.blogspot.com/2017/10/swamp-tears.html
Thanks so much, Susie and thanks for playing on your beautifully designed new blog--I loved yours as well--some of the phrases are definitely tattoo-worthy.
DeleteI stand amazed with Susie on the sandwiched stanza Hedge:)
ReplyDeleteHere's my painted picture...well, it's somebody else's pic...my words
https://angieinspired.wordpress.com/2017/10/06/exhibitionist/
I'm taken by the image of decay and emptiness, but then the active foreboding of the razored fruit gives a wholly different sense than just that of a passive decline. No roads, indeed. A grim world surrounds your thought in this, Joy. Not unusual for any of us these days, unfortunately.
ReplyDeleteYes, I don't think you can be unaffected creatively by what we are watching. This last week was particularly brutal. Thanks very much for your thoughtful comment, Steve.
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