Moondog
Moondog came,
barking wither-white;
turned things dead
with his rabid spit;
a year sickened gone.
Come in now
before we all break.
Hold me hard
while the howling brings
black hearts and blooms down.
~April 2017
Note: I have not only used Magaly's challenge, but a form
she has invented, called Thinner Tanka. Classic tanka(in English) consists of 5
syllable-counted lines of 5-7-5-7-7. Her variation thins this down to
3-5-3-5-5, for a very crisp framework which I probably did not do justice to. I
have chained my two wobbly attempts into one poem here.
Image: Frostburn, © joyannjones, March 2017
Moon Dog, 1975, © Rufino Tamayo, Fair use via wikiart.org




