~*~
From whiskbroom branches
blackbirds drop a watersong
brown rain in their throats
leaf mummies see the moon's face
music-washed night after night.
~*~
~*~
Winter's hand strokes wind
across the grain, a dry sea
flat in shades of dust
in time the lost mermaid dies
beached high in the bones of grass.
~*~
~*~
Let the smoke go up
pluming on horseheads of clouds
visible for miles;
let the wildfire come starved
to its briar sacrifice.
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Challenge: Why I Write Tanka, Part II
Dr Hisashi Nakamura has generously shared his knowledge and skill with the short Japanese syllabic form known as tanka in this series at The Imaginary Garden. A tanka contains 31 English syllables in a line pattern of 5/7/5/7/7. I find them very difficult to write, but easier than not writing them, perhaps, today. I have used the bare minimum of punctuation, so I beg indulgence for my grammatical liberties.
Process note on the third tanka: Like many areas of the western US, we are having wildfires this winter due to drought, high winds and human stupidity.
Photographs: Oak-Blackbirds-Maple, Prairiewise Seeds copyright joyannjones 2014

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