Showing posts with label payday. Show all posts
Showing posts with label payday. Show all posts

Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Payday Friday






Payday Friday


We left the bar to drive
to the nearest motel
like two kids ditchin school,
me and Hollywood, in his raybans at night.

It was Friday night, payday Friday.
All night he’d held my hand
across the table, laughed in my eyes,
pulled me close slowdancin George Jones,

bought me half a paycheck‘s worth of
butterscotch liquored chick drinks
basted me head to toe for hours in that
hot brown look, til I was more than willin.

All day out with the crew I’d thought of him,
eight hours of idle mind  on the brushhog:
chocolate eyes, lilt to the voice, laugh of a free man,
dark hair thick as moss, coyote smart.

He thought, I’m sure, of my breasts,
my long yellow corn floss hair, maybe
my hands, maybe my soul that knew
where he wanted it to go, without saying.

The bar was hot and rockin. All the guys from work
were there, all my crew and his, kicked back, all the ones
who’d warned me about him just shakin their heads,
smiles in their beers while we danced.

We never even turned on the light
in the motel room—there just
wasn’t  time, only time for wellspring kisses
smoky whispers  “Do you

love it?” barely time for the old soul story 
we told each other, substance over shadow 
in the big bed, smooth as the necklace of pearls
he strung for me

never put in pawn,
here in my jewelbox still.
Me and Hollywood.
I hope his wife treats him good.



July 2011 

A 3:00 a.m. runaway poem probably best at 3:00 a.m, with a nod to Coal Black for the dropped  g's, and the general proletarian ambience, and to Mama Zen for the chocolate. 

A brushhog is a tractor pulling a large mower deck, capable of rough mowing right of ways and brushy fields. Fun to drive. Hot loud and dirty, but fun.

Optional Musical Accompaniment:






and in case you're in the mood for the funkier original, Lowell George & Little Feat, singing the song that got him fired from the Mothers of Invention:






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