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Sunday, March 3, 2013

Quince X 2



Quince




Quince 
(free verse )



Stark tangle of december
black and bare, sharp and brittle,
hook twigs a shakespearean drama of thorns
spotlighting from darkness the posturing coral bud.

Life in death, wildfired and torched
over every branch, its ending
smoothed by something born
swelling in promise:

a Paris green blast of
bitter juice.





Quince
(shorter, as a shadorma)

Earth's burlesque,
december's bare black
theatre,
masque of thorns 
flaring color from darkness;
posed bud, bitter juice.




~March 2013



Quince



posted for  dVerse Poets
Poetics: Short Verse
Fred Rutherford's challenge is to tell a complete story, and to 'maximize effectiveness' through brevity. I wrote the first version of this free verse, then decided to see if I could shorten it by using a favorite form of mine known as the shadorma--a six line poem with the syllable count of 3-5-3-3-7-5. I'm not sure which version is more effective as they turned out rather differently. Thanks for the challenge, Fred.


Process notes: Paris green: " is an inorganic compound more precisely known as copper acetoarsenite. It is a highly toxic emerald-green crystalline powder that has been used as a rodenticide and insecticide, and also as a pigment, despite its toxicity..."~wikipedia  

Quince, on the other hand,  are completely edible and non-toxic, but extremely bitter.

Definitions of burlesque and masque.



Hover mouse for image credits, or click on picture to go to photographer's page @ flick'r  creative commons.

Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Mousehole



Mouse




Mousehole





I scream in the night
for the rescuers
but there are no sirens, no
flashing lights traveling
a moonscape of ash.

I lie down on the floor
open my mouth
pretend I'm a mousehole
so something
will come and live with me here.

Something closer than skin
warmer than frost at
heart dead void; it can be small
even as small as a sin
creeping in.

A warm twitch-nosed mouse
or even an unquiet imp
would be company enough;
dogs only sleep
and I let them lie.







~December 2012


Posted for   real toads
Challenge: Fireblossom's Wednesday Friday
The illustrious Catblossom has delegated this prompt to her accomplished acolyte Fireblossom, who asks that we write about disaster and cataclysm, or something. This is probably 'or something.'




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Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Quills

Stekelvarken Aiguilles Porc-épic


Quills


Living with her
was like living with roaches,
flimsy, easy to kill but never
really dead, always stutter running
always more hidden than shown
always a scuttling when the switch flipped,
impossible to hold accountable.

In a hard country, the dog chased
the porcupine
catching a hundred razor
barbed quills in his face every time.
Every time, they'd cut and pull them while he cried, 
saying, he's learned now, 
he won't do it again.

Before the blood was dulled dry, he'd be up
hunting, disfigured nose twitching, bantam
brain eclipsed, swollen with the useless rage
of the violated; just so, the child came back at her 
teeth bared, howling outside the den, nose down
for the yelling, the curse, the barbs in its
face, a hundred times.

In the rank stillness Mama Roach
drops her eggcase on the drainboard
casual as shedding a dirty thong.
Mating. Eating. Her own survival
absorbs her, and there will be more
eggs, many more. It's nothing
personal.


~August 2012






Posted for   OpenLinkNight   at dVerse Poets Pub
 I'll be hosting tonight at the pub, so come join us. Doors open at 3:00 PM EST and link-in is live through tomorrow midnight.




If you would like to hear the poem read by the author, click below:





Header photo: Porcupine quills, by lamiot 
from Stekelvarken.JPG (Image:Stekelvarken.JPG) [Public domain], via Wikimedia Commons


Saturday, August 11, 2012

Pentas


 
Pentas



The harder the times,
the 
more
I stretched
and dried,
the 
more, 
the brighter
you grew.

You were the color
in landscape burnt umber,
I the drab hill-coined
sunflower wilder than fire,
origin unknown.

You were the wrought iron
sun, the shadow soft
traceries of midnight
candle against
 monsters
under the floor.

You filled nothing,
yet the emptiness
slipped away 
in your
 tumbleweed kiss.
 In the
 dryheat storm
you brought the rain
that carried inward 
to the bone.

 You were 
my five pointed star
symmetrical in chaos
flaring flame-blushed coronas 
of uncatchable peace
above the dark soil 
of the heart.

Now there's nothing
in bloom
but words that plump
in acid petals behind my eyes
and cerise memories
even drought 
can't burn down.




~July 2012
revised August, 2012






Process Notes: Pentas lanceolata, also known as Egyptian Star Flower, is a tough and durable bedding plant for climates with extreme heat, and blooms better and more profusely the hotter it gets. It is usually seen in a cherry red or lavender color, though there are pink, white and two toned cultivars also. It has a vivid, lush green leaf and clusters of star-shaped blooms which are attractive to butterflies and hummingbirds. I grow it every summer.




Posted for   Poetics   at dVerse Poets Pub
Stu MacPherson of Poems of Hate and Hope  hosts today and asks us to try to find the Beautiful Sadness. (His photos are better than mine, but not of flowers.)






Images of wild sunflower and Pentas lanceolata  © joyannjones