Sugar Cookie
whip up another.
Watching from
moonlight's bright
kitchen
everything
whitens.....dusted with
confectioner's
kisses.....sieved from stars.
Sky's sugar sifter
sprinkles my upturned cookie
round face, once
soft as dough, now beginning
to flatten and crisp
in this absently regulated
oven
heat.............the baker's thinking of
something
else-------if one batch
burns...it's easy
enough to whip up another.
~October 2012
55 grains of pure sugar for the g-man
Process
notes: The ellipses and dashes are just a flourish, to make the shape more
cookie round, and to theoretically look like sprinkles of sugar, hopefully without annoying the reader too much.
Header Image: Cookie, by EvelynGiggles, on flick'r


i like mine a little crispy...just saying...if it aint got the crunch...
ReplyDeletebut then again, there are somethings you just cant whip up another of...
I like it crunchy :) My grandmother used to bake me sugar cookies...this made me miss her :)
ReplyDeleteYou are never annoying! :) I can't ever lightly brown rolls in the oven. It has actually become a family joke that I burn buns.
ReplyDeleteAwww poor mr. Cookie
ReplyDelete(hope his name wasn't bill)
We never think of those that make the ultimate sacrifice for the midnight snack.
Glad he had the moon to console him.
Margaret Bednar has overly HOT buns?
ReplyDeleteObviously!
Hedge...A little burnt is my favorite...:-)
It's getting to be the baking time of year.
Loved your Confectionary 55.
Thanks for playing, I really really missed you.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
(Ying-Ling)
Thanks my man--though that sounds like a suspiciously oriental name for a beer--I don't suppose they call it the Yellow Peril?
DeleteSw-e-e-e-t! What could that baker be thinking of?
ReplyDeleteBake someone happy...or not!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very cute poem. What I like on the deeper level is the exchange of cookie face for moon face, and the idea of the person with that dough-hardened face all whitened looking up at sieved stars. You're right that the baker can be a bit careless - at least whatever baked me has definitely lost track of what they were doing--so I can definitely relate. (I am particularly feeling the cookie crumbling tonight, I'm afraid.) k.
ReplyDeleteHa. I have been pretty crispy (and crumbly)for quite awhile now myself. Thanks, k.
Deletenow i need a sugar cookie!!!
ReplyDelete♥
This is the sweetest poem you have ever written! I am literally smiling big time here at the computer, totally charmed by it. Even the shape of the poem is the desired shape of the cookie. That it did not turn out quite that way is of little importance. Delectable, Joy!
ReplyDeleteCrispy! Now that's a term I hadn't thought of for this phase ...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed these sugar cookie images. They make me long for winter and snow.
Yummy! we woke to no power-no coffee... could have used a nice CRISP cookie! thanks!
ReplyDeleteBest description of a sugar cookie ever! And all in 55 words. Yummy. Wish I could bake the day away.
ReplyDeleteI thought the spaces in your poem resembled the cracks in the cookies - very cool idea. You work wonders with 55 words.
ReplyDelete"confectioner's kisses sieved from stars".....sigh. I need one of those cookies!
ReplyDeleteI Love concrete poetry, and crinkly sugar cookies! This poem works in all of its imagery. It is delightful, and its humor a sprinkle of sugar too. But it is not so easy to whip up another in the oven and by the baker you speak of as all sugar cookies are not created equal.
ReplyDeletesuddenly i feel really really really small... maybe "he" will let us have a few more sunrises before throwing this batch out and stating a new one =)
ReplyDeletethis is so cute, and love the concrete form... very well done.
You sure know how to bake up a good poem. Hope the baker really does whip up another batch - sweeter, unburned.
ReplyDeleteI love how you wrote this, just like a cookie too. I love it and so positive too. Yes, we can always bake another batch. That's how we improve. Love your sugary 55! Mine is here
ReplyDeleteHave you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira