The Dominance of Grey
A villanelle
The grey veil she wore ate up all the years.
It licked at her grimaces, nibbled her smile.
It didn't pull off, only washed off with tears.
At night she’d spit into its fine woven fears,
proudly wear it next day to hide naked denial,
It licked at her grimaces, nibbled her smile.
It didn't pull off, only washed off with tears.
At night she’d spit into its fine woven fears,
proudly wear it next day to hide naked denial,
unavailing shrugs eating flesh off the years.
The veil grew a voice and it talked in her mirrors.
It held her more closely than husband or child.
It didn’t pull off and she needed more tears.
What once would dissolve it now reversed the sheer
wisps to dark masking stiffened with bile;
the grey veil she wore grew fat on the years
as she aged, a blown eggshell, flat eyes, lips and ears,
her features erased like an asphalted mile.
It didn’t pull off and she had no more tears.
No salt left to wash her old face back with tears.
No mind left to fight for her long-eaten smile.
The grey veil she wore ate up all the years
It didn’t pull off, only drank all the tears.
The veil grew a voice and it talked in her mirrors.
It held her more closely than husband or child.
It didn’t pull off and she needed more tears.
What once would dissolve it now reversed the sheer
wisps to dark masking stiffened with bile;
the grey veil she wore grew fat on the years
as she aged, a blown eggshell, flat eyes, lips and ears,
her features erased like an asphalted mile.
It didn’t pull off and she had no more tears.
No salt left to wash her old face back with tears.
No mind left to fight for her long-eaten smile.
The grey veil she wore ate up all the years
It didn’t pull off, only drank all the tears.
~December 2011
The
multi-talented and erudite Samuel Peralta is hosting this week and writes on this classic
form as seen through the lens of physics and Dylan Thomas.
I originally
was inspired to write this after reading one of Karin's excellent villanelles,
so thanks to Karin Gustafson at ManicDDaily .
Image: Young Woman with a Veil, by Pierre August
Renoir, 1877
Public
domain via wikipaintings.org
Apologies to the Master for a focal black and
white manipulation of his work for this poem.










