My 55 for this week:
Cracks
Midnight's blue altar splayed
with a sacrifice of stars,
wind that tells secrets
to a storm darkened moon,
silence knocking with whispers,
blackbirds' questions at dawn
sharp marked on the sky;
all the weight, all the light draped
on the scream of a back
and in the shadow that passes,
the first of the cracks...
~March 2018
Note: I am having intermittent connection problems, so bear with me if I am mysteriously absent.
Images: Blackbirds, ©joyannjones 2013
Erecthion with caryatids, Athens, Greece, via internet author unknown Fair use Manipulated
I am still enamored of the night, the silence of the clouds, the roar of the winds, unseen things in the shadows I know are there. In time I would that I return to the star and lay myself willingly on the altar of night.
ReplyDeleteA month is too long between 55's
It is indeed, but sometimes we don't have a choice. It's all I can do to cobble these little messes together into something, anything...I enjoyed the trip through now and then you gave us Mark. Thanks for playing, and I agree about the call of the stars.
DeleteSuch portents, prescient and pregnant in the leys of cracks, tiny seams revealing the Infinite ... and yet, its still just a fault, a tiny fissure, "light draped / on the scream of a back / and in the shadow that passes ..." And we're left wondering it were better to search for the spackle or spread that mysterium wide. Careful what we ask for, eh? For the first of 55 cracks spread through this weekend, I say it kicks major butt crack ...
ReplyDeleteMy 55: https://blueoran.wordpress.com/2018/03/16/doctor-doctor/
Ha! Well, it kicked my butt to write it, anyway. And yes, I'm all for letting the cracks fall where they may. We're all headed for the same mystery anyway, no matter how much we try to spackle it out. Thanks for playing, B. Yours was definitely one that resonated for me.
DeleteNight is beautiful unless full with the unanswered questions of a troubled mind, and then one sees the ghouls in the shadows and doubts upon dawn.
ReplyDeleteWhen in hospital nights stretch to eternity and fear abounds, unfettered by the relative safety of daytime, the hope of possible answers to the worry of questions, yet to be asked...
Sad to hear you are in hospital Hedge – your unease/concern alive in your comments.
Kind regards and big hugs
Anna :o]
My offering here: https://hypercryptical.blogspot.co.uk/2018/03/sleeping.html
No I am not in hospital myself--just spending a lot of time at them for the foreseeable future with a loved one. Thanks for your concern tho, Anna, and for your 55.
DeleteGlad you're okay H - thoughts and hugs for you and your loved one in what is (I know from experience) a difficult time.
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what great imagery. I read it three times last night, and again now, savoring them. what our travails induce , as we watch that shadow approach. chill-inducing.
ReplyDeletepeace to you and yours, while we wait for what's out (or in) there to kick our asses. Some time ago on one of my pens, you quoted Tolkien and an elvish sage who noted fighting the long defeat. Well, in the meantime, may as well have a kick-ass weekend, one way or another.
here's mine for the week: slim
Thanks, M. Yeah, that quote from Galadriel has stayed with me over the years--even though LOTR is filled with many more positive ones. It seems to express so well a part of the endless human struggle that can't be changed. But yeah, let's kick some ass before it's too late, I say. Thanks for your presence, kind words, and always excellent 55's.
DeleteGaladriel, yes.
Deletecouldn't help myself - another furrow
Oh, this makes me think those secrets are too heavy. Last night I did some pacing until daylight. Today was reading another round of back and forth no give not take on Facebook, so I found my broom for this poem. :)
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The spirit of our current moment in time is surely a deformed one. You nail it with your 55, for which many thanks, Susie.
DeleteThe night can be harsh and cold and alone, unyielding and heavy, the New Moon is at work.
ReplyDeleteIndeed. Good to see you, Shadow.
DeleteI adore the blackbirds with their questions. They seem like a doom-saying chorus warning the main players center stage.
ReplyDeleteMine is not the usual light stuff I prefer to do for 55, this time. I dealt out a Trump card instead.
http://fireblossom-wordgarden.blogspot.com/2018/03/emblem-anthem.html
Just devastating and on the mark Shay. And the spirits that be I'm sure will definitely forgive you for not going light, because things like this need to be said. Thanks so much for being part of the 55 this week.
DeleteHere is my slightly late bit, for this week:
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Be back in a sec, to read what this week sprouted...
Cracks are such ambiguous things, half-broken/half-whole pictures of what lies in between, the beginning of something new or the beginning of the end... The metaphor could keep on going and going... But in truth, what matters is not the crack but what we choose to do with it. For the breaking will come, regardless of what we do, we can either shape it into something we can use (55 words that leave a mind wondering...). Or, we can let the crack rip through us. The time will come when the ripping is the only choice. Today, I'm thankful that the crack was shaped into telling words.
ReplyDeleteOver my shoulder, I can still see that cracklingly bright scream...
Yes, as I wrote about ruins earlier in this 55 word trail of crumbs, there is something to be made even from cracks, even from rubble, as long as you don't let yourself look back on what was standing before...anyway, thanks for your thoughtful response, dear Magaly, and for your kickass (if sad that it has to be written) 55.
DeleteI love this poem just as I love the night. I am an insomniac and often spend time sitting or walking outside in the night. I will be back a tad bit later with my 55. Have a kickass week!
ReplyDeletehttps://kanzensakura.wordpress.com/2018/03/18/march-3-march-17/ Here is my 55
ReplyDeleteSad to have these memories tangled in every spring...thanks for playing, Toni.
DeleteThe 55 is closed for this session,and thanks to all who came by. See you next Friday.
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