Showing posts with label cinquain. Show all posts
Showing posts with label cinquain. Show all posts

Saturday, July 30, 2016

The Heart Moth



The Heart Moth






There was
a heart that hatched
out a moth that landed
on my mouth, to burn; burn and fly
and die.

Too long
I've waited for my lips to cool,
to live, and missed the moth
because it was
my heart.


~July 2016











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Process Note: This is a cinquin, a short, usually unrhymed poem of twenty-two syllables in five lines arranged 2, 4, 6, 8, & 2 per line.  In the second stanza, I have reversed the order.






Images: Queen of the Night costume design, 1922, by Leon Batsk,   Fair use.
Moth, 1900,  by Albrecht Bierstadt,  Public domain.



Sunday, February 3, 2013

Portrait Of An Old Monkey


Portrait Of An Old Monkey



Monkey
with a white nose
has rages like matchflames
in a spelunker's cathedral,            
sudden                
then dead, blown as quick as they're lit;
has joys small as gumdrops,        
all swallowed whole
too fast.

Monkey
drops her red hat
in gold light's lost orange trees;
sees amethyst twilight turn black...
forgets.


~February 2013






posted for   real toads
Sunday Mini-Challenge: The Cinquin
Marian Kent of runaway sentence turns her considerable talents with the cinquin into a workshop where we can explore the many variations on this tight, five-line, syllable-counting form. 


Process Notes: This poem is composed of a Butterfly Cinquin (2-4-6-8-2-8-6-4-2) followed by a traditional five line cinquin (2-4-6-8-2)



Image: Portrait of a Monkey, by George Stubbs, 1774
Public Domain, via wikipaintings.org

Monday, October 17, 2011

City of the Mind

Bruxelles Musée Magritte


City of the Mind



Give me
a  page of night's
black stardazzle,  splash
across some buttermilk moon, and
you win.

Boxes  
physical, imaginary;
so messy carving off
parts so people 
will fit.





October 2011





Posted for    Sunday Mini-Challenge     at with Real Toads


This is my attempt at a mirror cinquain. (one cinquain of lines of 2,4,6,8 and 2 syllables  and its reverse.) Kerry O'Connor will explain it all to you at the link above.

Image: Photo of The Museum Magritte, Brussels, By Michel wal 
(Own work) via Wikimedia Commons