Showing posts with label terzanelle. Show all posts
Showing posts with label terzanelle. Show all posts

Sunday, May 25, 2014

Stone Ghost




Stone Ghost
A Terzanelle (of sorts)
for RCC





There was a ghost then
who seemed to touch my face
who smiled without the words again,

black horses in a broken race.
He thought he was alive;
I thought he touched my face.

I only counted up to five
fingers of flesh and air;
He thought I was alive

when we walked handfast there
above a sea of dust,
soft dolls of flesh and air,

the sharp cliffs shadowed rust
as sun bleached caryatid hair
waved white in a sea of dust,

snagged on the moon's rocking chair.
There was another ghost then,
with a sun blind caryatid stare,
no smile, only words to make it end.




~May 2014







posted for      real toads



Challenge: Play it Again
Margaret Bednar(Art Happens365) once again asks us to pull a challenge from the abundant archives at the Imaginary Garden With Real Toads. I have chosen Kerry's most recent form challenge, the terzanelle, but with apologies, because, as usual, I've not attempted pentameter, or even a ten-syllable line count, and taken a few liberties as well in slightly altering the refrain lines.












Photo: Caryatid, via wikimedia commons