Showing posts with label triquain. Show all posts
Showing posts with label triquain. Show all posts

Monday, December 20, 2021

The Crow-Mother

 

 
The Crow-Mother
 (a triquain)
 
 
As a child
I knew a crow-woman.
She loved shiny things, breathy south wind
and tall corn, green in the field of desire. She
wore onyx feathers grieving the time
when she had real words, not
just for me, 
but for everyone. She
was friend to doves unable to mourn,
a lover of small clouds which could never give rain,
a mother of all misplaced things: keys
coins and rings, strings, lost girls
life passed by.



December 2021















posted for Fireblossom
















Note: the triquain is a counted syllable form based on threes. It normally consists of seven lines, each line increasing in syllables by three to twelve, then decreasing again by three to the close. This is a triquain swirl, which is slightly different in containing 13 lines. (3 - 6 - 9 - 12 - 9 - 6 - 3 - 6 - 9 - 12 - 9 - 6 - 3).
 
 
Images: Crow Prince Charming, © Rene Magritte   Fair Use
Crow woman cosplay, via Sunday Muse   Fair Use 

Saturday, September 25, 2021

The White House

 
 

 
 
The White House
 
 
Fall is sky
of milk and water, of
sand and blood, a field of ev'ry fruit
and folly, gathered around the slant white house that
rocked its boards like a boat and took in
the moon's footloose orphans.
The white house 

grew a child;
it seemed safe there by the
warm muddy lake,rough beach of red dirt,
trees bent over brown water by the weight of locusts'
spell chanting out the night, the old gods'
didgeridoo. There were
always dogs
 
in the yard,
toys on the floor, music
in the hall, food in the kitchen, bells
of laughter rung on blue sheets, your bright virgin eyes
umber as winter oak, wild as wine,
alight in the white house.
Now the child
 
is grown, you
are gone, and nothing is
safe. The white house, drifting in its trees
by the clouded lake, is a slow rocking boat un-
manned but full; October's hand turns wind
 to firelight for moon's
last orphan.



September 2021










 
 
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Process Note: This poem is written in the triquain form, consisting  of seven line stanzas with lines of 3,6,9,12,9,6,and 3 syllables respectively.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Images: Old house, author unknown, via Sunday Muse  Fair Use
Autumn Day circa 1986,  © joyannjones 
 

Sunday, August 21, 2016

Mistakes


Mistakes





Dark flutters
words melted like butter
burn the tongue, her hand on your shoulder 
on a night from which every dream has been wrung
I looked for your face but it was wrong,
wrong for me to come here
with my snakes

wrapped around
the sad mistakes truth makes.






posted for   real toads






Note: This is a triquain, (a seven line poem with syllables of 3-6-9-12-9-6-3) to which I have arbitrarily added a final couplet (3-6.)





Optional Musical Accompaniment







Image: author and title unknown, fair use via the internet.
No copyright infringement intended.