Showing posts with label couplets. Show all posts
Showing posts with label couplets. Show all posts

Wednesday, July 6, 2022

Hunter

 
 

 
 
 
 
 Hunter
 

The heart is hunting alone and lean
after the things she thinks she has seen;
 
after meat on the doe not the sweetgrass sea
wind-combed in waves to wild-braided streams;
 
after the caterpillar's cuts and devours
not the greenstem-road to wings that it follows.

Her running breath catches at all the wrong times
at the taste of the dove, not the air it can climb.

The heart is hunting and so cannot fly
for that most alive is the thing which must die
 
too heavy to carry
too sought to let lie.
 
But when the hunt falters, breath evens and slows.
When the hunter suddenly unstrings her bow

what was looked for is seen in a stillness of light;
 shining like tears in the last hour of night.
 
 
 
 July 2022







 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
posted for earthweal's
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Images: Hunter, artist unknown, via internet   Fair Use
Woman in Grass, © Fosco Maraini, via internet Fair Use

Thursday, September 6, 2012

Sidewinder

Northern Copperhead

Sidewinder




There was no black in you (or I've forgot)
only autumn browns, eyes amber hot,

with an underbelly pale star-silver steel,
coldblooded stroking icy death to feel.

Always sideways, you reasoned me quite mad;
sideways ate my heart then made me glad.

No black showing, only mottled brown
of earth returning matter to the ground.



~September 2012

Copperhead Snake




55 whispery shed snakeskins for the g-man




Also 
posted for    MeetingtheBar:Symbolism   at dVerse Poets Pub
Victoria encourages us to explore the use of symbols in poetry. I had written this poem last night before reading the prompt, but I think it fits.




Process Notes: This poem is written in a very old, traditional style and meter, known as the Heroic Couplet. I got it into my head reading some poetry of Lady Caroline Lamb's last week, and now I can't get it out. Also, I'm having some back issues again, so please be patient as I try to return comments.



Header Photo: Northern Copperhead, by Michael Hodge on flick'r
Footer Photo: Copperhead Snake, by GA-kayaker, on flick'r
Shared under a Creative Commons License

Friday, April 20, 2012

Gone With The Wind



Poster - Gone With the Wind 01



"..I have forgot much, Cynara! gone with the wind,
Flung roses, roses riotously with the throng,
Dancing, to put thy pale, lost lilies out of mind..."
~Ernest Dowson, Mitchell's source for the final title


Gone with the Wind


I read the book then saw the movie; sad.
I dread the look the author must have had
When she saw her Scarlett on the screen
thin and flat as a paperdoll that screamed.

But still the sets, the dresses, widescreen shots
Shut out the gutted edits of the plot.
In hoops the glittering ladies waltzed like dolls.
In whoops the ballroom laughter, fans and shawls

Made it feel we graced that dance of time
Faded into glitter, forced to rhyme.
Missing sauce, I'm Melanie the meek
Kissing faithless Scarlett on the cheek,

Knowing Ashley couldn’t make his move,
Showing Rhett what women have to prove.
Six hundred twenty thousand soldiers died.
Tricks and love scenes, Scarlett’s stubborn pride

Are what we got wrapped up in 40’s glam;
War and Rhett frankly didn’t give a damn.



April 2012

Posted for   real toads
Mary's Mixed Bag



Framed Couplets
 (Couplets in iambic pentameter where both first and last syllables rhyme.)


Process Notes: I read Gone With The Wind three times in my adolescence, and loved every page of it, not only because of Mitchell's well-drawn characters, but because of all the rich historical detail she included--battles, facts, and thousands of lines about the background and mechanics of the Civil War itself, and through which she made them illustrate that historical period in detail (not that I didn't love as well all the soap opera antics of her main characters.) I was terribly disappointed by the movie--Hollywood at its most superficial, despite the lavish trappings and the excellent cast. But perhaps no film can ever have the scope of a thousand page novel. Anyway, both book and film are deservedly classics, and no slur is intended toward Vivien Leigh, though she never was the Scarlett I saw reading the book. To me Olivia de Havilland was THE actress in that one. And wonderful as Leslie Howard was, all one could do was scratch one's head and wonder what on *earth* Scarlett was thinking when she had Clark Gable eating out of her hand.




Image: Film poster for Gone With the Wind, 1939, By Employee(s) of MGM 
Public domain, via Wikimedia Commons 


Sunday, February 26, 2012

Mirage

Mirage



Can I trace it, that spider footed midnight kiss
that once walked its lips across my crying skin?

Is it hung head down in the cobweb spun across my
crumpled cheek; waiting still? starved rigid?

But no, it ran; I see its mark, staggering spider steps
through dry sand floating on the dust of desert years

at home in emptiness, a secret life uncurled after the
scirocco passes, charming away dead flesh from bone

not even a smell to hang in the drying frame of air.
Any little busy thing consuming convenient corpses

to white skull’s stare knows each precious drop preserves
savor and sweat for a  hankering life spent waiting

for the next foolish thing to drop, hamstrung by thirst
lost beyond finding, hallucinating deliverance

blinded by a lunatic sun that tilts the web's sweet spin
to catch an oasis kiss and in mirage to live again.



February 2012


Posted for  real toads

Sunday Challenge
featuring Ellen Wilson



Top Image: Web, by Ellen Wilson
Footer image: Blossom, by Ellen Wilson
of Ella's Edge, Used with permission. 

Friday, December 30, 2011

Butterfly



Butterfly


In out out in without disruption
warding the shell's inevitable corruption

in billowing sighs where the Master sits
the apprentice is peeking with eyes like slits

blind to a logic of infinite drops
in out out in till the raindance stops

each moment alone in a trance of calm
a butterfly netted in the silent palm

in now where his fingers play
out now already flying away




December 2011




Some nursery rhyme styled couplets for 
Gay Cannon's FormForAll prompt at dVerse Poet's Pub