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Tahrir Square, Cairo, Feb 2, 2011 Yannis Behrakis/Reuters |
New Kingdom
Bricks of mud and wattle crumble leaving dust,
sand and wind scour the marks of men from stone.
So many years the gods have watched,
doing the nothing that gods do so well. Now hands that raised the pyramids
fight hands that robbed the tombs,
and Time leaves the old gods behind,
empty in the grave.
They dream what they have always seen;
yesterday pulled across the dusty sky
to tomorrow in the sun’s chariot endlessly racing
while the people, brown and small
work the land, no more to them than clay
ushabtis that serve so their betters can live idle.
The dream is broken; still, the empty dead don’t see.
The world has bought itself new gods,
venal and hungry, with books of laws or checks
and new lists of things forbidden,or compulsory,
who care nothing for the harvest,
who prefer what the world prefers:
that men draw oil from the ground instead of grain,
sow the seeds of war and spill blood as inevitably,
as carelessly as the Nile makes mud.
Now new gods or no gods watch stones
draw living blood instead of wear dead faces
or god’s names, watch bricks
thrown and broken against bone,
and men drunk with power, armored in foreign gold
burning the future, hiding from time.
The preserver becomes the despoiler
and the land bleeds.
They watch, or they don't
but the world watches to see
if Time is the master, unavoidable,
heavy with days, come to
break those weaker than water
who pretend to be gods, and
raise those stronger than clay
who fight the long fight to be free.
February 2011
I love it when I read words and get all excited. These are just some of your's that did this for me:
ReplyDelete"Now hands that raised the pyramids
fight hands that robbed the tombs,"
yaaaaa xx
It is a long slippery slope that Mubarak has set his nation on. May them who long for freedom find it in their protest and may we who know of freedom stand with them.
ReplyDeleteI would that an Egyptian Mahatma would rise up amongst them and break the yoke that for so many decades has enslaved them.
You nailed it ... out of silent tombs of the gods -- and kings -- a present, prescient roar, not from the madness of past crowds but the sanity of a future dream. The Arab street's become a new world ... though it doesn't seem yet anyone knows just what follows rule of god-king-dictator. A networked voice, perhaps, in need of a networked divinity, or rather, cognition. Democracy is so much stronger than state police exactly because its so easy to fail, fall, bleed. It's human-sized.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful way to capture the struggle for freedom. The comment above me I think nailed it. Democracy is human-sized and that's what this poem reminds us of.
ReplyDeleteJoy Ann, very well-expressed struggle for freedom.
ReplyDeleteI love this line
"The preserver becomes the despoiler
and the land bleeds."
Pamela
So powerful, Joy! Wowzers! You have nailed it. I found the third stanza especially wonderful,
ReplyDelete"that men draw oil from the land instead of grain". I was electrified by your final stanza, and the fight to be free.
Whew!Great writing!
Hmm this place is becoming very familiar. I wonder if there is a real place that:
ReplyDelete'The world has bought itself new gods,
venal and hungry, with books of laws or checks
and new lists of things forbidden,or compulsory,
who care nothing for the harvest,
who prefer what the world prefers:
that men draw oil from the ground instead of grain,
sow the seeds of war and spill blood as inevitably,
as carelessly as the Nile makes mud.
Now new gods or no gods watch stones
draw living blood instead of wear dead faces
or god’s names, watch bricks
thrown and broken against bone,
and men drunk with power, armored in foreign gold
burning the future, hiding from time.
The preserver becomes the despoiler
and the land bleeds.'
I'm loving the satirical nature of your writing
Since everyone is picking . . .
ReplyDelete"doing the nothing that gods do so well"
Freaking brilliant.
I love "burning the future, hiding from time."
ReplyDeleteEvery night I turn on the Nightly News to see what's happened in Egypt that day.
Political poems are almost oxymorons, but you find the space here. It lead me to write my own today. Sometimes the inner world just can't escape the outer one. -- Brendan
ReplyDelete@blueoran : Yes, very true. They're difficult to write sometimes, but I think it's important to do so. I found your piece very insightful.
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